Can I Come For a Visit?
Can I come for a visit for a short bit of time?
I think it would be lovely, I would think it sublime
I'd drive down your street and stop at your home
I'd check out the neighborhood and let my eyes roam
Next door is your neighbor whom you don't really like
His brat of a kid chased your cat with his bike
I don't like him either though I really don't know him
You mentioned his name, was it Bill, Mark, Arnie or Tim?
Enough about neighbors, I came to see you
So I'll walk up your steps without further ado
I'll knock on your door or perhaps ring your bell
Will you like what you see? It's too soon to tell
Perhaps if a woman we might just embrace
Nothing too intimate while I look at your face
If a man friend, a handshake, maybe a pat on the back
You tell me to take off my coat, hang it there on the rack
We'll walk to the kitchen or sit on the couch
I'll remember my manners and try not to slouch
It's so good to see you, here face to face
I've thought of you often in your own private place
Perhaps you'd offer me tea, iced or brewed hot
Of course I'd accept, how could I not?
Though I know before I leave I'll have to pee
Of course I'll just blame it on that glass of tea
Maybe a beer would be more your style
As we sit on the couch and talk for awhile
Perhaps you would offer some crackers and cheese
Why, that's my favorite, yes, thank you please
An hour would go by, then two, maybe three
I'd get up to leave, there's someplace to be
But I'd thank you profusely for the snack and the talk
You might bid me return soon as we stroll down the walk
I promise I'll try to, wherever you are, in Arkansas, Texas or however far
To California, Michigan or in the Northeast, we'll gather together
And have quite a feast. If only God willing, I'll cross the wide sea
I'll visit Great Britain, I'm sure we'll have tea
I'll go to Australia, I've got several friends there
And you all come to Alaska, you might see a bear
It might never happen, but then, it just might
If we all gathered together wouldn't that be a sight?
I think I can sleep now, I'll go to my bed
And then in the morning, if I find I'm not dead
I'll check any comments and read the reviews
That happened while I went upstairs for a snooze
If for some reason I didn't arise
If I didn't wake up and wipe the sleep from my eyes
To my Fan Story friends, my thoughts were of you
I wish we could visit, I truly do
Tom Botts this is a very good tale of poetry. I thoroughly enjoyed it!!! I only wish you would have graced your presence on our steps for a visit… next time !!! ❤️
ReplyDeleteHi, who is this? Whomever you are, I'm sure I'd love to visit with you. As you said, next time. Thanks for the comments.
DeleteTom
I love it, Tom!
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ReplyDeleteHello Jill, It was something that just came to me after one of my friends on Fan Story had mentioned how fun it would be to visit. I'm not a poet by any means, but once in awhile it clicks.
DeleteThanks for the comments gal.
Tom
I'm not anonymous..I'm Janice Dietrich...I haven't visited your site for so long.
ReplyDeleteHello Janice,
DeleteI'm sorry I didn't see this sooner. I don't get on here every day. It's so nice to hear from you. I just sent a Christmas card to you guys. I hope that the address I have is correct. I've been a little slack in posting here too. I've written a number of articles for Fan Story, a writing site, and it takes a lot out of me. Wimpy I guess. Thanks for letting me know who commented. Blessings!